Wednesday, 17 August 2011

MY FUNNIEST MOMENT ESSAY

          In life, individual must have a one of the most sweet memories and funny in life. The most amusing memories in life will never fade in our memory. My funniest memories were when i was 9 years old. At that time, I and my cousin play a firecrackers and fireworks. At that season and by the Ramadan. Actually, my parents angry me to play because of dangerous fireworks. But at that time, I was a child who wanted to play 24 hours. One day, my father came home from work and my dad saw me playing a firecrackers with my cousin. Without much talk, my father stopped the car and came towards me. I was in fear and fled with all my might. I hidden behind a large water tank for 1 hour. Dad and I managed to tracked me. I ran it again with all her heart in the village in the fear and at the same time my father still has to pursue. After my father chasing me tired, I get home. I am in fear and hunger. Since it was already dusk and the time of breaking fast is due, i decided to go home. I arrived just at home, all my family members is laugh with my antics. Apparently, my father called me to see the baju raya that he had bought. That`s my funny memories i will never forget.

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  3. Ur english (grammer ) sucks big time. Go to the school n learn some english. You dont have any knowledge about the articles. I dint see a single article being used here. I am not talking about an article in a magazine. I.hope u understand what article i am talking about here.

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    1. It's grammar by the way . Perhaps you would work on your own English before correcting others .

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    2. ok where do i start, your, and, don't, didn't, I hope,and you.
      YOU should go to school

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  4. Its not a funniest moment.... It was a fear moment

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  5. I think most of the people can't understand what you are trying to tell!!!! Must improve your writing orelse none will appreciate you.

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  6. What you mean by buja raya.
    But it is also a good essay
    Good job.

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  7. your 'funniest' moment isnt funny at all but your grammar is

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  8. What grammer mistake, but good

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